The doggies walking alone by them self. They are brothers,and they are going to the park and will play there. Next they will go home and eat there lunch.
What a lovely day together. Next, you could add some more detail to your story to make it even more exciting. I wonder what they might eat for their lunch for example.
The dogs are running to a dog show in Hownslow. The other dog is saying ''faster Wilgo faster'' then they start pulling each other and start fighting and then one falls over and gets a little twist on it's paw .Then their ownerJoey says " stop fighting " and they start behaving properly like good dogs. At the dog show Wilgo and Wiljo win a game. Wilgo wins the jumping race and Wiljo wins the running race.
One day the dogs friends would like to invite to thoes both dogs are their birthday party.Then they walked through the road to get the party hall when they walked the first dog said to the secound dog 'come faster' but the secound did not came fast then they pulling each other suddenly they fell over and broked their neck belt.
Soon they arrived to the party hall when they saw the party hall they were very excited because there are a so many dogs were having fun.Some dogs sang a song some dogs were dancing in the end they all ate a spcail party foods.
When the party finished everyone said bye.....bye ... to each other the both dogs thought what a wonderful party .
Once upon a time the dogs went on a walk. On the trip they smelled some bones. The dogs owner had the bones and when he asked them, "can you smell the bones?" They barked yes. The owner gave them what was in his pocket. He even had some doggy biscuits and he even gave them that. When they were happy they asked each other "if they would like to go to a school" and they both said "Chatsworth primary school!" and they set off to the school.
Scruffy and Fluffy ran to owner to wash themselves. Scruffy accidentally jumped on Fluffy and Fluffy hit back and Owner controlled them and had nice wash in a sunny day. They had nice play with dog ball in garden. Then they went inside the house and ate their dinner and slept. ADARSH
The dogs look like they are running to their mother and father to have some pudding because mummy dog is really happy about them.Scruffy and Muffy need to get a bus to go ,the bus usually come's at 1o'clock,but it is already 1245 but the bus is really late today.Scruffy and Muffy were home at 3 o'clock.So they all had chocolate cake and 800 sweet's.
Hello i am raahavy from big Ben class and i have read all your comments i really like it even easha has told about the Goldilocks and the three bears i really like all this amazing comments and lots of you know how to use computers at year one i learnt it at year 2.
The dogs went passed the shops and they ran as fast as they
ReplyDeletecould back home.
I wonder why they might be running so fast? Are they running away from someone?
DeleteDoggies will eat bones and dog food. :)
DeleteThe doggies walking alone by them self. They are brothers,and they are going to the park and will play there. Next they will go home and eat there lunch.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely day together. Next, you could add some more detail to your story to make it even more exciting. I wonder what they might eat for their lunch for example.
DeleteThe dogs are running to a dog show in Hownslow. The other dog is saying ''faster Wilgo faster'' then they start pulling each other and start fighting and then one falls over and gets a little twist on it's paw .Then their ownerJoey says " stop fighting " and they start behaving properly like good dogs. At the dog show Wilgo and Wiljo win a game. Wilgo wins the jumping race and Wiljo wins the running race.
ReplyDeleteI can really imagine all of this happening - I like the way you have named
Deleteyour characters - it has brought them to life! What a happy ending too!
One day the dogs friends would like to invite to thoes both dogs are their birthday party.Then they walked through the road to get the party hall when they walked the first dog said to the secound dog 'come faster' but the secound did not came fast then they pulling each other suddenly they fell over and broked their neck belt.
ReplyDeleteSoon they arrived to the party hall when they saw the party hall they were very excited because there are a so many dogs were having fun.Some dogs sang a song some dogs were dancing in the end they all ate a spcail party foods.
When the party finished everyone said bye.....bye ... to each other the both dogs thought what a wonderful party .
finally the both dogs walked back to their home.
The dogs went on a trip but a aeroplane crash to another one so then they fold down on the dogs.
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Once upon a time the dogs went on a walk. On the trip they smelled some bones. The dogs owner had the bones and when he asked them, "can you smell the bones?" They barked yes. The owner gave them what was in his pocket. He even had some doggy biscuits and he even gave them that. When they were happy they asked each other "if they would like to go to a school" and they both said "Chatsworth primary school!" and they set off to the school.
ReplyDeleteScruffy and Fluffy ran to owner to wash themselves. Scruffy accidentally jumped on Fluffy and Fluffy hit back and Owner controlled them and had nice wash in a sunny day. They had nice play with dog ball in garden. Then they went inside the house and ate their dinner and slept. ADARSH
ReplyDeleteThe dd they dogs are a family.They are going to there house.
ReplyDeleteThe dogs look like they are running to their mother and father to have some pudding because mummy dog is really happy about them.Scruffy and Muffy need to get a bus to go ,the bus usually come's at 1o'clock,but it is already 1245 but the bus is really late today.Scruffy and Muffy were home at 3 o'clock.So they all had chocolate cake and 800 sweet's.
ReplyDeleteI think they are running to the shops to get dog food for there family.
ReplyDeleteIt is eaesy to walk a dog.You can put a leed or leave it around.It is fun.you walk it around and you have to take care of it
ReplyDeleteHello i am raahavy from big Ben class and i have read all your comments i really like it even easha has told about the Goldilocks and the three bears i really like all this amazing comments and lots of you know how to use computers at year one i learnt it at year 2.
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