Thursday 30 January 2014

One morning you wake up and look outside your window - this is what you see...

How many adjectives can you think of to describe the scene?
Please choose 1 or 2 words and write a sentence about what you can see.

**Remember to use a capital letter to start your sentence, finger spaces and a full stop at the end. **
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38 comments:

  1. Sienna30 January 2014 at 08:56

    It is very snowy and white. The river looks icy and the ducks look very cold.

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    1. Year One Chatsworth10 February 2014 at 08:48

      When you look at the picture, what emotions do you feel?

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  2. Nadine30 January 2014 at 09:01

    I saw some trees. They are covered in snow.

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  3. Anonymous30 January 2014 at 11:12

    The bridge is beautiful and snowy.It look's nice when i look at it.The trees are white
    like a snow leopard.When i look at the water it is shiny.

    by Igor

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    1. Year One Chatsworth10 February 2014 at 08:50

      Fantastic adjectives!!
      Don't forget to use a capital for I.

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  4. Sricharan1 February 2014 at 02:17

    I found the following adjectives.
    1.Amazing 2.Awesome 3.Cool 4.Beautiful 5. Freezing 6.Interesting 7.Chilly
    8.Cold 9.Icy 10.Snowy
    This picture is amazing.
    The ice is cool and cold. The ice is on the trees. The trees are beautiful.The bridge looks awesome.

    The ice is cool and cold. The

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    1. Year One Chatsworth10 February 2014 at 08:51

      Super adjectives!
      Could you use a connective (and, because) to extend your sentences?

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  5. Anonymous1 February 2014 at 06:36

    There is white snow. It is like paper. The water is like a mirror.It is an amazing sight.










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  6. Shreya2 February 2014 at 09:24

    It is very cold and the trees are frozen.

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  7. Aisha3 February 2014 at 10:49

    It looks really cold and freezing. The trees are white.

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  8. Hamza3 February 2014 at 11:54

    It looks chilly and the mud is covered with snow .

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    1. Year One Chatsworth10 February 2014 at 08:55

      How does the picture make you feel? Would you like to go outside?

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  9. Arush3 February 2014 at 12:19

    Trees look white and it looks cold. One of the trees look big and it looks amazing out there. It looks like it is snowing.

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    1. Year One Chatsworth10 February 2014 at 08:56

      Can you use the connective 'because' to explain why it looks amazing?

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  10. Unknown5 February 2014 at 06:12

    Hello Year 1!
    I love that so many of you are starting to enjoy using your blog. You have added some lovely description.
    Keep up the hard work.

    From
    Miss Jolliffe

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  11. Ashvin5 February 2014 at 11:59

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  12. Anonymous5 February 2014 at 12:47

    Its cold and whitish all over. Peace and calm full nature. Water looking like a mirror and the trees are looking like zombies having white nails around their bodies. ADARSH KOTI

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    1. Year One Chatsworth10 February 2014 at 09:00

      WOW! Some really descriptive sentences - this sounds like a great opening for a scary story! Can you write a story about the picture?

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  13. Oviya6 February 2014 at 01:31

    The picture was look amazing...; the sun was setting down ,ducks were slept in the pond. A blossom were covered in snow white ,it s so beautiful....;

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    1. Year One Chatsworth10 February 2014 at 09:10

      Great work - you have looked really carefully at the picture.
      Make sure you read you sentences back to check your grammar - The picture looks amazing: the sun was setting; ducks were sleeping in the pond; the blossoms were covered in white snow. It's so beautiful.

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  14. Kaushal Thatta6 February 2014 at 13:11

    The trees are wonderful in snow . The bridge looks slippery . Water is cold .

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    1. Year One Chatsworth10 February 2014 at 09:06

      Can you think of 4 adjectives to describe the snow?

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  15. Rytham7 February 2014 at 14:17

    Rytham
    It is nice,chily,snow is on the tree branches....and the water is cold and it is look like a mirror.

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    1. Year One Chatsworth10 February 2014 at 09:20

      Can you think of 4 other adjectives to describe the water?

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  16. Adam9 February 2014 at 11:26

    The trees haves snow and the water is beautiful and chilly it is snowy it also lookes like a wintery place.

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    1. Year One Chatsworth10 February 2014 at 09:19

      Super adjectives! Don't forget to add a full stop when you pause and take a breath.
      The trees haves snow and the water is beautiful and chilly. It is snowy. It also looks like a wintery place.

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  17. Avmit9 February 2014 at 23:25

    This picture looks cold, frosty and sunny, which makes me happy and then I cross the bridge to see nice flowery fishes.

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    1. Year One Chatsworth10 February 2014 at 09:13

      What an imaginative sentence? What do you think you would find if you walked behind the trees?

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  18. arush11 February 2014 at 10:05

    I think it is frost and snow because look at the place it is all covered in white and I think it is snowing and I think you are right Sricharan and Rytham.

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  19. Hamza11 February 2014 at 10:11

    It looks cold in the picture but I like to go out to have a snow ball and take it to school.

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  20. Ram24 February 2014 at 13:59

    The trees are wonderful. Weather looks freezing cold.

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  21. Unknown25 February 2014 at 09:11

    I would do a snowball fight and go on that bridge at Uxbridge

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  22. Unknown25 February 2014 at 09:14

    I would have a snowball fight with my school friends

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  23. Unknown25 February 2014 at 10:11

    FIRST I WOULD HAVE A SNOWBALL FIGHT AND GO ON THE BRIDGE TO THE OTHER SIDE

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  24. Anonymous12 March 2014 at 14:00

    Senaya Suriarachchi

    Before night there was snowing.The trees are white.The trees are fully covered by the snow.

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