Imagine your story is set here - can you write an interesting story beginning?
Think about the setting (what you can see, feel, hear, smell). Remember to use amazing adjectives!
One night, a lion came to the spooky forest. The trees looked like a wavy branch. Then Lion felt a ghost was behind him but it was not there.The Lion smelt good things to eat. Then he found a trail of lamb. Then he heard his friends roaring. The Lion followed the trail of meat. After he followed the trail of meat he found his friends.
This is an amazing place because the amazing thing is that there is magic everywhere so when you touch something it turns into something you want to wish for. It smells like magical fairy dust, the magical fairy dust smells like cakes, chocolates, sweets and flowers. It feels magical and silky, soft, smooth . I can see magical fairy lights and things are turning into other things. I can see blue, green, brown, silver, gold, red and a little bit of pink. I can hear magical fairies talking and fluttering around. The fairies sound loud and squeaky when they talk. The fairies are getting ready for Amy’s birthday party and she is getting crowned fairy queen. The fairies were called Lilly, Milly, Amy, Lucy, Poppy, Rosey, Maya, Jaya, Milla, Isla, Sofy, Amelia, Tom, Henry, Sofia, Alla , Lira, Sparkel, Megan, Sparekly. They are all fairy friends!
wow,....., it s awesome ,fantastic and a wonderful night,the moon light was amazing,.I can heared some animals that are wolfs and foxes might be sang a song [woooooooo,ooooo] in the beautiful night.. In the night wood i can smell some flowers, I was really love this amazing night.
Once upon a time there was an amazing forest. It smelled of beautiful flowers that smelled of fresh strawberries. The stars were shining brightly. There lived a little girl, she loved to play with her toys.
I was walking in to the dark wood to look for my lost toy when I was playing with my Brother. I saw scary tree with amazing branches, I saw scary yellowish grasses and orangi leaves. I felt lonely and scared. I smelt bad smell coming from nowhere. I heard owls tooting and Foxes howling loudly. I heard water drifting.
I felt fears and I heard a scary noise whooo.......whoooo coming just in front of me. So I ran fast as I could to my home near the wood.
Once upon a time there was a tiger who lived in the jungle. Once a lion came and said this is my own green land world. The tiger figured out what to do - why don't we the share this magical world. The lion agreed and said "that could be a good idea". We can both be the kings of this land and they both lived happy ever after with all their wonderful friends.
Once upon a time there was a monster world with green giant trees .There lived two monsters whose names are Max and Tom. They were very best friends. One day they were wondering in the trees suddenly a bright light came from the sky then all trees became shine and started singing and dancing like a witch .Tom and Max were scared and run away .At last they reached their cave and they were safe.
once upon a time there was a man in a village and his village was massive his friends were helping him to build a house. the man was called Sam. His friend was called Max and one was called Rex.Sam "said we can go on a adventure but his friends did not want to come.so then Sam want by his own.
once upon a time there was two monsters who lived in the jungle and there was eight sparkling fairies ,they where having a grand party in the middle of the jungle and in the sky there was some big shooting stars.At the same time the monsters came and wanted to spoil the party but the fairies waved their magic wand and made the monsters go into a big fog.
Once upon a time there was girl called Rose .Rose had chubby,pink cheeks they were like pink,chubby,red roses.One day Rose decides, to go for a walk but...suddenly a spooky,punchy wolf blocked her way,then she fell into a camouflage hole.Rose could see yellow,bright,sparkly,smooth,soft magic flying up and down and all around.The trees have spiky,thorny leaves that sometimes sting you she could smell green fresh grass.Roses friend Milly thought of eating the green ,fresh grass,but they didn't because the green ,fresh grass was unhealthy so they decide to go to the shops to buy some apples but the apples were green,they wanted red apples so they went to the Rose shop they found the right things,they needed apples.
One night, a lion came to the spooky forest. The trees looked like a wavy branch. Then Lion felt a ghost was behind him but it was not there.The Lion smelt good things to eat. Then he found a trail of lamb. Then he heard his friends roaring. The Lion followed the trail of meat. After he followed the trail of meat he found his friends.
ReplyDeleteWhy do you think the forest was spooky?
DeleteThis is an amazing place because the amazing thing is that there is magic everywhere so when you touch something it turns into something you want to wish for. It smells like magical fairy dust, the magical fairy dust smells like cakes, chocolates, sweets and flowers. It feels magical and silky, soft, smooth .
ReplyDeleteI can see magical fairy lights and things are turning into other things. I can see blue, green, brown, silver, gold, red and a little bit of pink.
I can hear magical fairies talking and fluttering around. The fairies sound loud and squeaky when they talk.
The fairies are getting ready for Amy’s birthday party and she is getting crowned fairy queen. The fairies were called Lilly, Milly, Amy, Lucy, Poppy, Rosey, Maya, Jaya, Milla, Isla, Sofy, Amelia, Tom, Henry, Sofia, Alla , Lira, Sparkel, Megan, Sparekly. They are all fairy friends!
What would you wish for if you visited the magical forest?
DeleteWhat different openings can you think of to start your story? For example, One day...
wow,....., it s awesome ,fantastic and a wonderful night,the moon light was amazing,.I can heared some animals that are wolfs and foxes might be sang a song [woooooooo,ooooo] in the beautiful night.. In the night wood i can smell some flowers, I was really love this amazing night.
ReplyDeleteWhat characters would you meet here? Can you continue the story -
DeleteOne beautiful night, a little girl was walking through the forest...
Once upon a time there was an amazing forest. It smelled of beautiful flowers that smelled of fresh strawberries. The stars were shining brightly. There lived a little girl, she loved to play with her toys.
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing story beginning!
DeleteWhat characters did the girl meet in the forest? What adventures did they go on?
I was walking in to the dark wood to look for my lost toy when I was playing with my Brother.
ReplyDeleteI saw scary tree with amazing branches, I saw scary yellowish grasses and orangi leaves. I felt lonely and scared. I smelt bad smell coming from nowhere. I heard owls tooting and Foxes howling loudly. I heard water drifting.
I felt fears and I heard a scary noise whooo.......whoooo coming just in front of me. So I ran fast as I could to my home near the wood.
By Methmi
What a brilliant story beginning!!
ReplyDeleteHow many different words can you think of that mean the same as 'scary'?
Once upon a time there was a tiger who lived in the jungle. Once a lion came and said this is my own green land world. The tiger figured out what to do - why don't we the share this magical world. The lion agreed and said "that could be a good idea". We can both be the kings of this land and they both lived happy ever after with all their wonderful friends.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful story. You have begun to use speech marks - great work!!
DeleteOnce upon a time there was a monster world with green giant trees .There lived two monsters whose names are Max and Tom. They were very best friends. One day they were wondering in the trees suddenly a bright light came from the sky then all trees became shine and started singing and dancing like a witch .Tom and Max were scared and run away .At last they reached their cave
ReplyDeleteand they were safe.
once upon a time there was a man in a village and his village was massive his friends
ReplyDeletewere helping him to build a house. the man was called Sam. His friend was called
Max and one was called Rex.Sam
"said we can go on a adventure but his friends did not want to come.so then Sam want by his own.
once upon a time there was two monsters who lived in the jungle and
ReplyDeletethere was eight sparkling fairies ,they where having a grand party in the middle of the jungle and in the sky there was some big shooting stars.At the same time the monsters came and wanted to spoil the party but the fairies waved their magic wand and made the monsters go into a big fog.
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a lion siting in a tree. then someone fell him down a tiger fell him down the lion was still sleeping
Once upon a time there was girl called Rose .Rose had chubby,pink cheeks they were like pink,chubby,red roses.One day Rose decides, to go for a walk but...suddenly a spooky,punchy wolf blocked her way,then she fell into a camouflage hole.Rose could see yellow,bright,sparkly,smooth,soft magic flying up and down and all around.The trees have spiky,thorny leaves that sometimes sting you she could smell green fresh grass.Roses friend Milly thought of eating the green ,fresh grass,but they didn't because the green ,fresh grass was unhealthy so they decide to go to the shops to buy some apples but the apples were green,they wanted red apples so they went to the Rose shop they found the right things,they needed apples.
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