Once upon a time there was a junior astronaut called Fred. Although Fred was only 6 years old, he was already an excellent astronaut. He was a kind, helpful and thoughtful astronaut. He was also very clever; always solving tricky problems and thinking up new adventures. Fred lived with his family on a planet far far away called Purpeal. The planet Purpeal was purple, always hot and made of cheese.
One day Fred climbed into his terrific, enormous rocket and blasted off into Space. He was happily looking out of his window when out of the blue a loud alarm started buzzing and the lights in his rocket started flashing. Suddenly ...
What happens next? Can you finish the story?
when the alarm came from the rocket fred didn t panic because he was a clever, always solving tricky problems.However he went to saw were the alarm came from fred aleady had his tools he was solved the problems then the alarm was stoped.
ReplyDeletefinally fred went back to his planet he told his problems to his mum and dad their were very shocked and feeling sad . Perhaps fred s mum and dad were very proud of his son because he was solved the tricky problems.
The alarm was ringing to warn Fred that the spaceship is about to land on the moon,as this was his secret mission to the moon.The moon was made of rock,Fred had a secret Rock Box he looked for all sorts of rocks ...But, there was one rock missing, it was the precious rock ever,he couldn't find the right one,but he was so good at solving problems so he could also solve this problem,and he did!He went back to planet purpeal.He told Elsa and Zoe,his two sisters, all about his trip to the moon .
ReplyDeleteSuddenly Fred was crashing into the moon. Fred was so scared. Fred tried some of the moon it was made out of chocolate. He liked. Fred felt happy and better. He liked the planet it looked beautiful. Fred suddenly heard a noise, it was a big hairy monster shouting ''RRRREEEBBBB gimme chocolate ''! Fred gave him some chocolate. Then the monster was friendly they played together . But there was a bigger hairier monster who roared .Fred was really frightened. Fred wanted to go home. But the monster disappeared. Fred felt really happy. Fred waved goodbye and flew home. Fred felt safe at home! He told Rebbecca and Zoe about his trip! THE END!
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ReplyDeleteThe alarm was ringing to warn Fred that the spaceship was out of control. He jumped out and landed on the beach. But the spaceship exploded! He walked home and played in the garden with his sister. He told his mum that the spaceship had exploded. She was cross but glad that he wasn't hurt. Then he carried on playing.The end.